On 2nd thought I don't think an omniscient narrator is necessary. I just got rid of the words readers didn't get.
About the title. What I meant by it was that humans are singular beings, having only one self, and also that Newmia is a singular being since the Imray, at least the ones she knows about, place a high value on conformity, and she is different.
So why was I thinking of changing it?
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